我的第一封邮件:
Hi,
Good day!
For the samples, hope we can talk here! There are some suggestions you can think about it.
1. You know the sample aslo would like to open mold, but you just would to pay the feright. We have cooperate DHL or UPS.
2. If you really want to need the samples, you can make order and then we can send you free samples before production. It just our advice. How do you think? Waiting for your reply!
Best Regards,
说实话 写的一塌糊涂。For the samples, hope we can talk here-这句多余! There are some suggestions we want to point out . 第一句表示看不懂。how do you think ?这口语常用的吗没必要写在商务电函 而且和WAIT FOR YOUR REPLY 重复了把