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我们公司是做电子产品的，是工贸一体形式，我们的优势就是我们的产品基本都是我们自己设计开发的，是做自己品牌的。
但是看我发的回复率以及我自己也会检查总感觉怪怪的。我把例文发出来，麻烦大家帮我看下问题点在哪里。
Dear SIr/madam,
Hello. How is everything going? This is A from XX company.
Our company has manufactured phone accessories for years and we have about 300 workers. XXcompany has successfully established partnership with renowned companies -- the B agent in Ukraine, and C,a global distributor.We also have some online platforms likes Amazon,Global source,Aliexpress,Ebay and Flipkart. Products include chargers,speakers,protectors.We have CE,FCC,ROHS certificates.This is how we keep superior quality and competitive offers for global valued customers.
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Would you like me to send you the detailed company information and products?
Please let me know if you have any question/query.
We're sure your inquiry or requirement will get prompt attention.
我这份专业吗？
请各位大神帮忙瞧瞧看有没有需要修改提高回复率的。
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发表于 2018-6-14 09:33:00
楼主